LyRikLyNkLyNd's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[FF | Maple Street Funk]

Diggity!

Smooth like puree'. This is pretty awesome to fuck around a rap a few diff styles on. I'm vibein on this jam like crazy. There's a faint sound in there that sounds like foot steps. Add's to your comment nicely. Good jam.

freddyfinger responds:

holy shit it does sound like foot steps lol, good ear. thanks man, im glad you like this and thanks for reviewing :)

[Reggaetar]

pretty good

The first solo could be practiced. Other than that you hit the genre perfect (Reggae that is) at points I was expecting sum singing like Slightly Stoopid or Rebelution. Great track, I wish more people on here appreciated reggae rythm's. I'd love to see a section. keep up the good work.

Tombor911 responds:

Thanks so much. I can't really practice anything tho because the solo was all improvised...
Thanks for the review tho! =)
-Tom

[PJ - Mind Games]

YO YO

Nice bass. The voice sample is pretty muffled. The guitar is great. All the sounds are very crisp, only thing i'm hatein on is the voice sample, the scratches are even muffled (intentional?) prolly because your scratching the voice sample, duh. Thats the only quarrel, Great track for rapping.

PoyzenJam responds:

thanks
yeah we'll see, i might take em out idk yet
thanks for reviewing man

[The Cycle's Complete]

I like this

The recording was not the best quality. The chorus was good for the most part, sum parts peaked out, The verse was muffled. Great Lyrics tho. I think this is more rock since you hear the bass plucking rather than the drums as the bass. Great Rap/Rock tho. I love the music of this, it's very simple but very catchy. Also you really need to fix the quality on the the verse because you have an awesome style. your a really clever cat and I enjoi what you've done here

[FF ft HW | Please, For Me]

Nice work here

Please, for me, will you belive
I got a couple cards hidden up in my sleeve
Nuthin I need but a jam like this
And a bag crammed full of sum light green bliss
no miss, ya'll 3 pegged a winner
I guarntee none of ya'll have got to beg for dinner
center- stage, Get the- pay
IM JAMMIN ON THIS WICKED OLSKOOL THAT YA"LL MAKE!!!!

stay up

freddyfinger responds:

thanks man

[Help Me, Please]

Pretty decent freestyl

I just wish you had better mic quality. You get a 6 cuz I couldn't hear you sum of the time. You have a quite a bit of rage with your style and rhymes. Nice flow, you stayed on the beat pretty well, I just think that your style is more fitted for sumthing more sinister. Keep it up tho.

[HW - Piano III]

Masterpeice

This song has the greatest atmosphere in the universe. lol, I listen to this song when i'm tryin to relax and think, or sleep. This is my favorite in the piano series of yours.
Prompting a real-time description
1:00 is lift-off.
1:45 is the boost kicking in to begin you through a long and arduous journey. 2:07-3;00 it's like ur traveling through lightyears of uncharted space. Then you behold the beautiful galaxy on the other end of our polarity through the time space continuom.
4:00 comes into the comforting feeling of knowing theres life out there, balanceing with the fact that our contact with this universe could topple our own.
5:00 minutes is the ambitous decision to head and be-hold these paralell people. 6:00 minutes is the decsent, deeper into their galaxy to be-hold their worlds. 7:00 minutes brings the sighting of a battleship manned by a far more andvanced people.
7:20 is your utter destruction until an abrupt ending sends you flying out of bed, unable to contain yourself until you realize it was all a dream.....

I wish I could draw or do flash,lol

haywirehaywire responds:

haha damn thanks for the detailed review....

[HW - Day 7 Beat 13]

Another one

This ones pretty dope too. Great for freestylein on. It's too late to record now but i'll prolly hit this up soon.

haywirehaywire responds:

thanks dude

[Gangsta Love - M.I.C]

decent track, love the hook, but...

Not much bout sum real gangters. I thought it was about 5 p's and six points on top. The end could have came much harder Honestly I think you got your g.E.d but you never learned about sum wings. Speak on progression and i'll feel that gabgsta shit u talkin "I could write a couple of novels wit the wisdom that i've learned, Poetical prophet preachin put practice in my words." There's 5 p's that are audited but integritized. Think on the basic philosophy and improvise from there, don't spit like mainstream then clown on em. Stay up tho and keep makein tracks, just come prepared when you talk bout what you talkin bout.