LyRikLyNkLyNd's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[open ya eyes]

Great flow and lyrics

Amp the vocals sum and change the melody to sumthin that hasent been dropped national and you'lll have a hit single. Nice work, Only thing I don't like is the hook because it's autotune. I never really enjoy autotune because it sounds too labored in a bad way... Everything is great tho, I could hear this on the radio with a lil transition of the melody, sounds too much like 'EM gon drop any second. I'm fixin to go check ur other works, Keep up the flow on the beat homie, you got skills.

twickz responds:

fo sho ima get on a new chorus n ima get it on another beat thanks bro

[GG_all_Day]

I'm stuck on this

I'm stuck on this!!!! i'll write u sum lyrics on friday... or whenever they stick, maybe tomorrow, it's an off day but I got shit to do, we'll see

DjSpaghetti responds:

wicked man ill check em out

[Dreamin' On A Cloud [7000]]

means very nice

Is he dreamin on a cloud..... or dreamin out loud?
seven thou' drop the smooth and make the demons get from round.
So even to conceive that he's a bum or just a louse,
is blasphemy to me because it made me run my mouth.
I'm lovein on this track, it gets me vibrant like the indica.
The bass is sooo stanky like sum beetle nuts from india.
Ending up a bobbleheaded mess by thirty seconds,
I gave a perfect score because the beat don't need corrections.

VEDDDY NICHE!!!

[Yumbo-Yak - Left Fi3ld]

CRANK THIS!!!!!!

Hatein it for ur Comp, but lovein this beat. 1:33 the strings sound a lil off key, But other than that I almost wrecked my computer wit my cranium while immitateing a bobblehead! Nice work, I hope the FLP issues get worked out so I can hear sum more fyre soon.

Yumbo-Yak responds:

lol, i lknow...but it wasn't too bad, the problem was the instrument and the fifths, they were fifths, and the harp was a bad choice :(

[Provin Em' Wrong]

Proving me wrong

Just when I thought today couldn't get any better...well here I am. Carzy beat for sum one liners, lol i feel like 04 jeezy when I free on this. YEAAAAAHZ, they say the future is the deal, with deloreans I caught em so they nippin at my heels YEAAAAAHZ WHile they say they too realistic, I wonder why the car and outfit is too balistic YEAAAAAHZ I'm the yacht and the schooner, as soon as I took off then u could call me sumthin lunar YEAAAAAAHZ the whole city wit the mp3 and even mutha fuckers makein singles bout to envy me!

[Lejin - GrimDriven]

I drive grime

I'm glad u decided to come back 2 NG.

Lejin responds:

So do I, But what does that have to do with Grim?... nice try

[CKC - In The Night]

Killed me

FUckin ILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL. Yea thats the explainations, gotta cold melody like it's a vaciation, Elation
Lyrically i'm feelin it no hate-on-l-a'
lol i'm to drunk and sknuknd to erview but i'm on whats u doin, keep it up. love em ery time CKC1

CKC2009 responds:

yay for drugs and booze!

[Wyze - Fragments]

Hell Yea

Wyze Killin. Love the ABC's. First verse is grity as fuck, I like the way you rappd it like your a stick up kid in an alley. Like the freestyled hooks, I can tell a great improvement in your flow since i came to this site.

Blasphem-E responds:

Glad you liked it dude

[The Countdown (Kill Someone)]

sum times I bury hatchets, but only in necks

Vocals sound like they clash with the cymbal, Maybe tweak em on solo. Try to bring it in deeper. Songs awesome tho, love that juggalo style, and u hit the mood great. Keep makein em homie, your one to watch.

DJKorpz responds:

One of the most positive and constructive reviews I've ever gotten on this site. Thank you, I will try to take your advice, be sure to look out for my album Harmonichaos, it will be up for free download hopefully before the end of the year.

[Munnee & Wimminz]

or other things u smell like...?

Rick Astley and brit-hop? This is classic. I love this track. I love your comedy, it's awesome. My brother made a Rick astley spoof with a rockabilly band. This is hilarious,I hope this gets weeks best. good job fellas