00:00
00:00
View Profile LyRikLyNkLyNd

215 Audio Reviews w/ Response

All 348 Reviews

This is like the great resurrection of the people in the graves at mid cemetery around midnight. They danced up from the grounds to trance upon the soul once more. If ever there were a living onlooker they would see not a thing to behold....

They'd be brave and steel balled while they stumble and shiver;
To step the ever climbing grade on which they wish to deliver
These skeletons find the ever living wish to consider;
A life fraught upon a lost cause covered in glitter.

I'd never wish that all my wishes had a 'with your back'
I never thought I was outrageous for not trusting cats
I'm catatonic; A bubbonic hypochondriac.
I think i'm sick cuz every day I have a heart attack
My figure cast black souls down the steepest of paths.
When I look back up I only grin and then laugh.
With all my teeth broke out, i'm bout to sleep when I crash.
This happened when I placed my feet at the mass
I neve said I was the people for completing the task...

.

DelitescentAria responds:

is that an original?

pretty damn skippy although some of the rhymes schemes are a bit lazy
good vocabulary

keep it going, its a nice read!

The road that I was missing, strolling on a mission.
left with indecision, and nothing to hold.

Stuck within the rhythm. Luck, lust, and lemons
Got to break the limit of the things I behold.

ChronoNomad responds:

Are you a fan of Lynyrd Skynyrd, perchance? That's what your username leads me to believe, at least. :D

Thanks for the quick vote and cool lyrical snack, man! Really glad that you dig the track. Luck, lust, and...lemons? Hopefully the experience won't be too sour. Stay thirsty.

I see a fin out there in the waves. It waves with such disregard for the wind that it just waved at me. It has this waving movement pushing it closer to shore.
The tides are fulfilling the force to exile a being which wishes to be free.
A beast of a fish rumbles up in the breaks within the next instant.
Before me are the menacing jaws of a monster that could snap me in half with minimal effort. My mortal presence is immobilized upon a dune of sandy displeasure...

"HOW dare you crash A beach party!" Cries a voice from beyond the wreckage of people and waves. It was the smallest scream resounding like it had encountered some graves. All the bodies were there standing, not a person to sit. WHen the waves caught the shark that always chomped at the bit.

"Onlookers embraced the shark as if it were their own.

RealBlargMaster responds:

I am totally and completely speechless. I don't know if you took that from something or if you wrote that yourself, nevertheless it's absolutely gorgeous and it makes me smile deeply.
*Sheds a single tear* I shall ne'er henceforth see sharks in the same light again. Thank you

Damnit this is so neon motel melancholy. It's almost like you were the first to take a ride on the space elevator, but the brakes never worked at the top..The stars WILL align one day.

KrinnValKhristi responds:

tytyty ^_^

I just really like SOS ;/ And this really FUCKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO's The end is like an 8 bit pirate shanty. It would be slick to see some gangter ass adaptation of link riding harrp like robin hood to sustain secluded societies. Maybe that would be too microcosm though? It would def. fit with this short track! I truly wish I could present what I see in my mind to this portal; When I say it people get lost in some existential quest for zelda's lost tri-force. But, the visions and voices do not ellipse with consciousness. They are separate entities ever spiraling into destruction. The spirit raised above them to coordinate the cataclysmic traffic. It's the eyes in every sentence, and the structure of the information super highway. You're brain is the sadistic rape puppet in the office of awkward psychologists with an in for brief stands. Constant acknowledgement and cheap plans, It's all just a fleeting stand.

To the eternal, there is no internal. There is only wave space; where the frequencies collide to abide, and coincide with every rhythm's divine. Only phantoms controlling the flow that's deep within tides. If the Gravity lies? How is the cat gonna land?
When stretched out to see how it got it's feet and it's hands.

SirHadoken responds:

Thanks for the five stars, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
There is no greater tool than a vivid imagination. Thus, I can undoubtedly respect the vision imparted upon you when your imagination and the song interdigitate.
Cheers. ;p

Damn I really like this. The Branch man climbs up out of his mess, while helping others un-jumble their existential duress

Wondermeow responds:

Thanks for your review glad you enjoy it

I almost feel like the MK, and other samples should be more of a whisper. Like they're speaking to or through you, instead of being high with the music. Impersonations and modal progression are awesome when working on projects like this. It's always crazy to talk to yourself in a rap like talk back, I mean rappin you kinda always are keeping a journal; representing that flow of water in your brain, while trying to relate to what you see daily. But; having samples ask the question or pose the basis? I understand the nostalgia. I just feel like the vocals are great. The samples almost take away rather than flowing with or adding to. Some fx and maybe some subtle reversed vocals with the samples on the outro. Play around with it, I dunno if you mix the vocals. Burnt Reynolds, I fucking love it! Instant follow. keep the practice.

Traumatik responds:

Awesome review bro !! Thank you very much, I really appreciate it! I remember you from back in the day, I used to go by Traumatik1

Yo this is lit! I like the whole beginning of the song. and the last 8 is slick, I even like how you rounded it out kinda silly after doggin on silly. It really is straight not given a fuck! HAhahha, this is kinds southern rap rock style. I liked all the jokes, fun track!

Teqneek responds:

Thanks for the review man; been a ghost town over here so it's definitely nice to check my page and see something like this.

I coulda swore there was a track named placid rhodes floatin around. I prolly don't remember correct but it was either haywire or Poyzen jams. Unless you just revamped an old song of your's cuz I know I was vibein to your tunes around then too.

Kamikazi1 responds:

YO! I used to vibe your jams too! Glad to see you're back as well. Freddyfingers made a tasty beat and called it placid vibes i believe. Just recently found out he passed away and i made this jam in the spirit of him but its all original just rhodes instead of vibraphones

Kinda has an R&B vibe. but a bit more progressive and positive than freaky blue and sensual. The end gets sexy, I could imagine a romantic beach setting under the moon and stars, hoping to be a star to get closer to the moon. the distance between is the scene and how we plot with the moves. She always gives me the blues, but then I chase her for days. She's like the moon light i'd bite if I got past my barking ways. And barking up a tree or at the moon is overplayed. She knows I feel her vitamins, she sees it on my face. I'd prolly catch a case, if she ever had a change of face. Me and her the best couple paired among the human race. Luna

Ruko29 responds:

wow!! nice imagination bro :)

I'm considered sumthin like guerilla on subliminal

ATM @LyRikLyNkLyNd

Age 36, Male

Dead end job

Chattanooga,TN

Joined on 5/21/09

Level:
8
Exp Points:
672 / 710
Exp Rank:
96,673
Vote Power:
5.05 votes
Rank:
Town Watch
Global Rank:
51,848
Blams:
40
Saves:
119
B/P Bonus:
2%
Whistle:
Normal
Medals:
75