LyRikLyNkLyNd's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[CYPHER - Fuck haters (DizzyC)]

Yea so basically

/Haters on my balls like a wood land tick
Suck my blood only if it;s just to make em get thick
too sick, try to take mine? i'm rottin your innards
and when Im rappin you won't think it but I listen to skynerd
/White meat chicken dinner goin perfect with beer
I'm like "Sphere" exploit a fucker usein only his fear
you can't hold me, brazierre, i'm always up off the hook
work 2 full times like a zombie when I'm a cook
/no booked, I 180 from county, and run from bounty
i'll never go back where they'll have me workin the foundry
2 hots and cot, vestie wanna suck my cock
Before I let em cuff me I'm make the police take a shot
/Non-stop, still grizzy so i'm makein sum more
And keep it all with a reciept so I can open sum doors
what for, cuz I'm tired of livein just for today
you know tomorrow isn;t promised till you take it away

Ha, ATM the Bank minded, Predator non Prey, young prosperous individual

Ya, sign me up, I have my wirtten. You got sum tyte beats, hit me up on Skype or PM so I can E-mail you.

[Sympathetic- MYDBoi]

a lil too sympathetic or apathetic, hmmmmm

I agree with sauce but i think the piano needs to be a bit electronic since that one synth is heavy and electronic. sounds like sum sort of lead string section on sum space shit. The strings in the back are epic and will give a good feel to any instrument ;). The contrast between the piano and the electronic synth are a bit too much IMO. I would either sway the elctro to orchestral, or sway the orchestral to ectro. I dunno, just my 10 pennies and a nickel, I'm no producer. Shit's tight tho, shoot me a link when it's up if you put it on net anywhere.

MYDBoi responds:

Hey thanks for your time to review. Yeah now that you mentioned it, i guess it does sound alittle off in all. I think i'll keep the piano for more of like the verse part of the song. Im glad you liked it though. I took your idea into consideration and added another synth to play the piano part for the chorus.
Thank you again. I'll note when you im done and/or if i post anywhere else.

[SH - Mars]

I'm there

Hmm, really I like this more than your sampled stuff, theres one note in the melody that is the wrong note(it's in the intro to), other than that this is pretty good, you should swear off samples for a while. Your style is better than sum throwbacks, I'd like to see what you could do in a month of workin without samples. I bet money you'd be bangin. keep it up bro

[Kami | Hotboxin]

Hotbox like a baked clam, fogged out in shell shok

0 Bomb so stomped, get ya flattend like a roach bug
same kid in real life wouldn't half approach us

Haha, This is nyce, I have sum words, I'll record saturday

32 bars this evening, I'ma prolly do 60 ahahaha Hotboxin, CHE-YEAH!!

Kamikazi1 responds:

that would be tyyte man let me know if you do something

[SH - Downtrodden]

YEA

WOW, Where the fuck did this come from? left field just missed a pop fly!

Another day another car note, House or an electric bill
The doctor said i prolly need to pop me an eccentric pill
Zombie kill, neva gonna be one
Bust a head and get my paper if an when I see one
Re-run everyday, but it causes diffrent adventure's
I have to get it how i'm livin cause I won't be indentured
way to compulsive to venture, I'm makein them come to me
My driveway is a parking lot my neighbors tryin 2 suein me
Doobie after doobie afternoon like a sublime song
Switchin lanes skiddin but I'll never hit a pylon
Dialed in, so you better crank it up
People hear my music and their thankful im cantankerous!!!

shaggyhaired responds:

Record that dude

[Wordplay Proving Ground]

hell right

I like the third part, I guess it's second verse. Crazy flows here tho. I like this song, JP did what he always does on the beat + the vocals are on point. This is fyre. Your voice sounds like a less bassy NAS but definetly original. Great for the feeling of the song. Cahnge lanes in the highway in my mind, Right on homie, I say shit like that all the time in my raps's I SWITCH LANES! (drop clutch) SKIiiIiiIIIIIIIIIIIiDDD HAHAHA STAY UP

KeepingOnPoint responds:

THanks!

[Transitions - Dureagon]

HE LIKES IT!! MIKEY LIKES IT!!

Does Dureagon mean "Unique" in sum language? I only ask because everyone of your tracks shoots fucking missiles at the norm. I've been listening to your music for about a week now, and I'm more enticed every time I hear a new song. I'm going to have to rip one of your beats one of these days.

/Woke up in the mornin, whole world smilein at me
Gotta go in 1-10 not halfly
Pass me? you never could, I stay in the turnin lane
Lookin out the widow at the world see it through the pain
/masachistic with my visions, life will hand me lemon's
But I won't suffer a division, I'm too optimistic
causein constant mischief I review it with a hundred words
that's after the triage because you're gettin blugeoned first
/Burnt the turf, now I stand on sod grass
Drinkin from the keg, suck my dick because it's on tap
Outlast any of this half wit never could's
turn me to a has-been, makes me think I never should
/if I would, then you'd see me topping the spire
Just like the angel on a christmas tree but startin a fire
Burn-ing desire, for what isn't but it's shown to be
rappin in the spotlight is like a second home to me
/hold to see me in the traffic, but im too static
I was taught to drive by guys that mixed up the muriatic
Kickin wit the old scholl guise never plastic
On sum sad beats to your surprise im extatic

Well hell theres 20 bars for me to work on, May be sooner than expected homie. I'll get at you

DJDureagon responds:

Glad you like the music. There's more to come. Dureagon is just a name. Let's pretend it means something deep and philisophic.