LyRikLyNkLyNd's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[HW - Day 1 Beat 2]

nice work here

That 70's club music. This beat is pretty fuckin fyre, love the melody at 1:42 on feels like a Doors/Disco hip-hop masterpiece. 10 days of bliss, oh joy!

haywirehaywire responds:

thanks haha

[Dry Your Tears]

This is masterful

Great song mixed into a great beat. I love the reggae influenced beats, and seeing how the sample comes from one of my faves, theres no possible way to down vote this. I see 5's and 10's and downloads in your future...aww shit that just happend.

[Summer Madness]

Wow, this is amazeingly chill

Love the atmospher of this song, Feels like i'm on a space elevator, DING! top floor! haha. Nice relaxing feeling on the melody with an intense tick on the drums. It's almost like speed ballin 0_0 ! Great song I'm checkin the next one too.

[The Tale of Stickam]

OMFG u are mai jesus

"You say you got a boyfriend, he's just out the door
I say "If there's a goalie, doesn't mean I can't score" ' Fucking awesome, I wish this was more than just a verse. Funniest I've heard out of stickam, keep it up

merlin responds:

Glad to have appeased you, my sire! be sure to check out some of my more serious work, too!

Regards,
merlin

[HipHopLoooooop]

I didn't kno about this

Fuckin awesome. I love the reggae feel to it, It almost sounds like a video game at :34 to one minute. Cool track man, keep up the good work

[Bongos, Brass, and A Bad Prez]

Gotta love the bongos

Bongos are pretty wicked. I wanna hear a dif scratch track on this tho, I already heard the 'may god bless you' and its sick, but i wanna hear what u do on another. I've heard tha sample of the bass guitar in the verse on this site b4, but it still goes great. I like the drum roll at 1:16 with the build up(and its implamentation at the end), but it seems like after that the beat should come in harded or at least transition. Nice track tho, keep up the good work.

shaggyhaired responds:

Thanks for the review.
I agree about the transition part, but I didn't really know how to implement it.

I made the bass part myself using BroomstickBass Vst, but it may have been done elsewhere.

Thanks for the 10 man :)

[my enemies(instrumental)]

I dn't kno y this score is so low

But, I do know I voted 5/5 9/10 because this beat is fuckin vicious. At 2:40, i guess thats a typewriter or machine gun, It just dosen't sound that great too me. It's probably incorporated with the lyrics? I'd love to hear the full song, is it available anywhere?

[Bone Thugs x Eazy-E x Master P]

Mixture Maximized

OMFG this is an awesome mix. I didn't like the Jay-z/Wayne one u did, prolly just because the a milli verse got stumped by so many other artists. The Asher Roth A-milli verse is the best. I love on to the next . This rite here tho, very fyre! Couple of my classic favs. Nice work homie, keep em comein

[[SoS] Depressed]

sounds like....

Not quite as well as the origional. Maybe sum of the horns clashed wit sumthin in the export, I dunno, but this should be labeld 'In The Night (Remix)'....actually I duno if You did anything other than time strech.....Make it longer and specify the remix and it qualities and I'll vote for serious

[open ya eyes]

Great flow and lyrics

Amp the vocals sum and change the melody to sumthin that hasent been dropped national and you'lll have a hit single. Nice work, Only thing I don't like is the hook because it's autotune. I never really enjoy autotune because it sounds too labored in a bad way... Everything is great tho, I could hear this on the radio with a lil transition of the melody, sounds too much like 'EM gon drop any second. I'm fixin to go check ur other works, Keep up the flow on the beat homie, you got skills.

twickz responds:

fo sho ima get on a new chorus n ima get it on another beat thanks bro