LyRikLyNkLyNd's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Voices In My Head]

Yo, this is sick track!
I can see a fallout bunker; dingy from time and mossy swamp, buried deep in the earth. Directly above stands a great ancient tree hanging ripe with the fruits of all taste and culture. Fireflies dance among the fruit seeking to find those that are most ripe for the picking ritual.

Deep in the bunker; The ghosts of scientists clamor around a robot skeleton on an operating table as if they were surgeons. What a desperate battle for life this was! The ghosts were trying desperately to maintain the little bit of memory the robot had left!

Then, in an instant. All the things where found to diverge. The Tree swayed, The Firefly's danced, The Ghosts faded, The twiiig of the ripest Fruit snapped, The Bunker illuminated, ANd The Robot sprang to forward on a new frequency.

All the memory stored away to come rushing forth from the ripest fruit, which is you

Ruko29 responds:

wow....emm thanks xd.....thanks for your comment :3

[Gift [WIP]]

I really like you're structure through the fours. thats kind of how I write. You lead in with a 2, run 4, then back out with a 2. And it's so hard to ever figure out what should be where... 2 8's? a chorus and a half verse. Or the chorus' on each end of the songs spectrum depending on how you structure the verses context... especially on a loop. It's sick starting the next line rhyming with the end of the last, but way hard to figure where you fit it in when you blast. you can really ramble with those sentences because they basically punctuate to Example (the core - theme; the obtacle, and the overcome) It's almost like you gotta sing it coming in, but you rap it cuz thats what you know. Everything is relevant as long as you know it is, poetry in motion to define how you're feeling. I wrote rap and posted em for 2 years here, now i'm trying to figure out how to structure a sing song. It's all pretty fun and fulfilling. Keep it up bro, the next ones right down the street!

budjohnson responds:

Dude thank you for the detailed review. I really appreciate it. Yea I started out only doing 2s or 4s but for everything I did here I was really just not focusing on the structure. Might’ve been a bad thing, but yea that’s why I’ve been having a lot of like free verses type deals.

[-mao- Life Slices (Maobux Vol.3) prod by Zooloo75]

YO! fucking loVe!

MaoDaMighty responds:

thanks A-ron! long time now see, nice to hear from ya!

[Addicted- Cajete Ft. DJDj]

YO! this is murderous

NeoAlchemist247 responds:

Thank you... Its borne of a serious problem. A cage wherein I have found myself trapped for years. I try to escape it, but then this incredible, frightening and magical moment hits me... And I ask myself if I truly want out of that cage.

In other words, its real as fuck. I worked hard on it. I hope you can relate, and if you did... Good. Know you aren't alone.

Stay awesome, Lyrik.
~DJDj

[The Trix]

YO, sick lyrics! Hell yeah, fuck rewind, jump those fears and habits today, hop skip and fucking leap light years through the pages! Flow is tight and subject matter is great. it's hard to bring the feeling from a home studio sometimes. Don't get lost in the times my friend, keep living today for yourself. Practice, be patient....and get a pop filter XD They're like 25 bucks at guitar center. it'll save you time and frustration trying to mix that out, and make you sound much more crisp!

FelTiProductions responds:

Thanks man that really means allot. its funny tho the mic im using is a a disney high school musical microphone that i found at half price books for 3 bucks it works for now,

[Beez Chillin]

Thanx, cuz i'm enjoing listening to it

O-vosho responds:

Thanks mate. Much Appreciated :)

[Get Lifted - ft. Nadi - ATM]

In Joy

I really like what you did with the mixing, My shit has like an evil robot filter on the libs, Fucking ILLLLL. I needa get up on sum shit man, I been away for a few months. I'm glad this is at 4.40 after two months, the haters startin to register the recognition they should have attributed to talent in the first place. BLAH, Hahaha I'ma check sum of your newer stuff and see if we can collab, KNOW HOW I GET IT!

dacookup responds:

Im Back. ... THX ..2 all .... Many MORE HITS 2 Come...

[[E7] Half Beast]

!!!!

Fuckin ill,' Eyes roll to the back of my head, I wonder if theres really life after death, vultures watchin my steps, until I break down, they stop by and pick my brains out'..... Fuckin flowin son. Very nice shit on here.

GloineFiodh responds:

glad to see the diction was there. thanks man

[soillohsoquezy]

wery niysh

Oh my fucking what the fuck? man I was dazein through the intro and was like alright this pretty chill. But then the beat comes in and I started writeing this! nice track has a really good sound to it. I like this alot

fidgetfreak responds:

thanks man. was ironicly written durng a quite depressed state, yet it draws a positive outcome haha. but once again, i thank you for your time!

[One God]

One god whose style is untiled no stone set still

Don't worry about votes and scores on this site homie, just make your music, network, and get better. If thats sumthin you wanna do. You are pretty good at arranging sum beats, I enjoy it at least. Start perfect your mixing skills man, That bill ting throughout should be a resonant nuance with the tick roll and hit are way too trebled, they need to tone down a tab or the bass needs a boost. The arrangement is so fucking hard man, you can do sum things. I could go for a few more transitions, but that voice sample is run in nicely, maybe a lil transition on that to but it's fine the way it is. You make Mali Dance and Fuck Party music, In my opinion, guaranteed to get a crowd hoppin! Hone those skills in man, Dope arrangements here with this cat. Browse the portal and look for cats with a good whole and full sound and bug em for a collab. I'm sure there sum dudes around this joint that would help you progress. i would suggest stayin in the Olskool section too because the level headed people kick it over here, unless they finally added a dub step section on NG, doubtful ;( but truly delve into the net and forums and post sites for a lil while and see what you can learn about mixing because if these are your true arrangements than I'm a fan already, can wait to here sum of this with a comprehensive mix. Contact a cat named Haywyre. Hes into Dubstep and I think his live set-up is still down so he's around the house maybe if he likes your style he'll work with you a bit. I only suggest attempting him because he's the most talented producer I've seen come out of NG (not much for a 2 year stint in the modern NG with audio portal. I've scoured newgrounds since a youngin with the tellitubbies sniffin coke and the original pico school game, Even the old tank battle BS where the portal was all submissions by the founders before the bout asses upon asses of server space. I have much love for this place, And I think that if you search for the cats That embrace the olskool newgrounds of knowledge and forward progression. After the clock crew and the flash portal got big it was trolling 0 bomb city. Thats why people score your shit without listening and don't leave reviews. So only pay attention to the people that give you love and want to help you progress. Much love

Rant on you music, This is how my mind is working from the sounds you have given me

Bare witness, there is only one God, who is interpreted as many things, but is in the end only the first ever thought, and a hope that people wouldn't succumb to their ability to innovate their own demise. THe stories that are told about him only reflect the tale tellers own greed, and his hope to succeed. Sumone else runs the show now, but you do too, we all do. Supposedly! But still I know there's not a cage or cell that's set for holding me. True and press demons to never get through. Clear thoughts, cold vision cuz my hart is too. Still I know that
One god whose style is un-tiled, no stone set. Still known to get vile will compile my thoughts properly. If only to teach the people modern living properly.

I wanna catch up on one of your good beats when I'm wasted like I am now , Shoot me a pm and I'll give you my email and shit.

ElderBabaji responds:

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