LyRikLyNkLyNd's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[SH - Flute Me? Flute You.]

Fuck dat, flute 2

Fox news microphone's blarein at a monotone
Flip to Cnn and they attackin wit sum fuckin clones
Known drones for the cause of mass ignorance
bout to Malvo, flip out and start killin shit
Not realy, but I'm actually belligerent
And ride for the people if the action turns to militant
Still in this for my own cause,
Independent stimulate the mind to overthrow laws

Got a hook, time to cook...

shaggyhaired responds:

Hellll yeah it is.

[[microphone]]

I molest a cardioid

I think there may be a bit too much compression on the vocals. It's hard to get that balance sumtimes, but you definetly had sum nice rhymes. I could tell you're really into the flow but at sumtimes it seems like you should calm down a lil and just make sure you spit that one line before you're worryin about the next one. I would say that has to do with memorization. Memorization helps alot with figureing the best breathe patterns. Dude I remember a few months ago your lyriks weren't on this level, I love the multi's. Keep progressin man, that mixing is the only thing I could say you can imediately 'fix' is the vocal mixing, the timeing is only iffy on a few lines but the compression definetly needs a tweak. Verse 2 is very nice. Keep it up man

THEICONICICON responds:

Yea man im going thru different vocal formulas..to get it to sound good..lol and yea i noticed the improvement too...

[SH - Beginnings]

This shit right here is tight

Im really liking the melody on this. Hook is tight as hell wit the scratches. I really think this is one of the better songs you have done. It's weird, kinda feels like Shanghai Noon, as queer as that may sound. lol. GUD SHYTE

shaggyhaired responds:

Haha thanks dude.

Weren't we supposed to collab a while ago?!

[Die in Vain]

YEA, Finally

Fuckin Ng fianly postin ur shit, this is pretty tight. The vocal quality sounds a lil muffled but the rap is great. The hook could use a lil more emotion behind, lyriks are great tho. I'm glad you're here now bro. Get at me wit sum W.I.P's so we can collab, I got Nadi on sum crunk shit as I type. Been a lil slow on my concepts ccuz of workin all the time, but I can still get the fuck on when I have an Idea. first 6 bars of verse 2 are so fuckin tighter than protected pussy in a porn store.

JayWeed responds:

thanks man im still workin on my mixing skills, thats the hardest part for me. Def be hitting you up soon for somethin to collab on

[[E7] Walk on Clouds (prod. SH)]

Yo.....

I have a verse for this song, we could do a collab! It's pretty tight. Hit me with a PM if you want to. I won't be hard to extend this a lil and get on. hit me up man, I think a Lyrik and Gloine collab would be tight.

GloineFiodh responds:

definitely dude. i'll hit u up

[[Fets] Oo Oo Ahh Ee Ee]

I need to stop writeing now...

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Malice for the world cuz I caught sum bad dice rolls
But I got alota cheddar flushin out sum mice holes
Nice rolls, no watch or a fitted
And you can't watch me when i'm switchin lanes i'm way too commited
Still sittin in the traffik, baked and bobbin my head
Your friends'll say they got your back but then they rob you instead
I seen alota backwards shit but ain reversein, the red
Line is off the chart when pushing on the pedal with lead

Call me Fred, I got the local opinion
young yodel vocal Invoke people into sum minions
Decisions riddled with protecting dominion
I'm my own boss, hustlein my scratch for a livin, i'm on a mission
Botanicals the banister for holdin me up
Don't start to think that i'm dependent on the first of the month
No chump I'm a real man countin my lumps
That I caught on this journey of comein up from the dumps
No slump, On an upward grade
And there's no curve from the pupils so I'm about to get paid
I keep on doin my usual, so what else can I say
I am immaculate when mackin shit, Bout to fill attractions with,
Flow concept is harder than the beat he try to grab em wit
keep a fuckin stash of this, cookin and brewin
Just to spit out like babies pukein when they belly get woozie
I'm not too choosey when i'm pickin my words
But still cause lyrikal mischief that make you think i'm absurd

Nofets responds:

Nice, record it, let me hear it!

[A Mili ReMix]

Doodle doobie doo

Beat is tight except for the droneing a milli in the bak....HAHAhahaha. Nice work, trun that into an instrument and shoot me a PM i'll fuckin r.i.p this shit!!!

Tranzphonic responds:

what kind of instrument would you like?

[SH - Jive]

They called me a jive turkey.

Juke, Jive, and a Jittery step
Fried chickens whole, thighs up, even the neck
times up, I ain eatin it yet
Not dirt nor dust, I ain't kickin no rocks
only a door till it bust
Loiter at the record shop, listen to the looters
I'm propogateing truth so u should get ahold of reuters
News groups speaking are the single worst polluters
Poultry uncooked, stagnant water in the cooler
a pregnant teen checking dialation with a ruler
While the teachers searching for her ole man, Buehler
Buehler Beuhler Beuhle, still he dosen't answer so he musta just fooled her
Young rap idol, listenin to plies
Now he's got a patch of rashes on his pelvis with sum mites
....
Eh, sub-par. but at least I got a lil sumthin in.

Beat is fuckin tight mane, I'ma bee on suma you shit SOON! got sum time freed up recently

shaggyhaired responds:

Fuck yes.

WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN

[Kami | In my car]

When I was just Robbin????

=0=)=0=)=)=)=0=)=0= Listenin to music, listenin to music, listenin to music!!!!!

dude this song is epicly tight. Great intermission to a road trip playlist. If it had sum lyrics on it, it would be really tight. Wow dude, I still have not raped one of your beats. how Odd?.?.? I should probably do that... I hope I remember to do this tomorrow, this beat is too far in my love meter to miss it...

Kamikazi1 responds:

Thanks man that would be really tight if you spat some flow over it i'd love to hear it!

[AJ: It's Possible - Durea]

Le de dade

I'm taken off i ain comein back to this shit town
I'm headin off into the world bout to get shit now
State can't can't get me down i'm past the papers
pull past the state line it's no longer a caper

It's the journey. One day you stop and think, why the fuck am I doing this, and not doing that. Cought up in an endless repetitive cycle of monotiny; just tryin to break the chains of daily life, you decide to cut the string and float away. As you drift away from the place that gave you so much safety, you realize you never needed it when the whole time you could have been pillaging the zombies for their every raunchous breath. Rape the world like it wanted it, but it does so it ain't rape. The simplicity of doing what the fuck ever for a couple of years is what is going to build you for the rest of your life. It's time to make that concious decision and realize that if you aren't doing what you love then you aren't doing shit.

As I float to the beach, I remember these hills and bid them adue. It's time to roam the fields.

DJDureagon responds:

hmm poetic. I guess you like the song so thats good ^^.