LyRikLyNkLyNd's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Travelin' [7000]]

Space travel trippin on lucy i'm seein diamond sky

Meye GHAW. this is mytee nyce, the pauses give you time to kill a straight 40 bars on this bad bitch, the space melody at the out is really nice to cue you to stop freestyling soon and make it a real poduct. I say it wins, and thats all that matters to me

[Life of crime]

haWd

My life of crime decides to shine when i'm behind on my bills
But I think I do it really for the giggles and thrills
twenty's triple, get bills, gotta hustle after work
so I can get a mix at the station or buy a new shirt

[SH - The Best]

Any way the wind blows

I masturbate to this beat with my speaker, it's fun, I hope I don't accidently die lol, ya kno, I do the best I can

[Get Lifted - ft. Nadi - ATM]

In Joy

I really like what you did with the mixing, My shit has like an evil robot filter on the libs, Fucking ILLLLL. I needa get up on sum shit man, I been away for a few months. I'm glad this is at 4.40 after two months, the haters startin to register the recognition they should have attributed to talent in the first place. BLAH, Hahaha I'ma check sum of your newer stuff and see if we can collab, KNOW HOW I GET IT!

dacookup responds:

Im Back. ... THX ..2 all .... Many MORE HITS 2 Come...

[SH-LOZ- Lost Woods]

BLAAAAAHHHHHHHH

I'ma get up wit princess mary, but i'll be all over your latest in short time. tell Zelda she better keep it drippin, I've got the missing link for a wood nymph, lmao

[SH - Busted Out]

Vicodrone

Gone on sum mushroom tea
Feel the calm waves of serenity rush through me
Brush my teeth and step into a winter wonderland
the dog's will act like puppies cuz they just don't understand
snake heads turned to guppies, hippies to yuppies
You need to put you big boy britches on, loose the snuggie
it's colder then a mother fuckin brass, huggin a titty
But my brass stay hugged to, not showin pity
150 on a frozen interstate i'm close to facin my death
If death's immortal then i'm made of his breath
CRy out to raise hell,
I heard that for assassination jobs it pays well
I'm tired of a man that thinks he's sexy in sum madewell
thats bitch clothes, didn't you know? you look like a faggot
change the skinny jeans and quit rubbin your package

I think i'ma have to sit down with one of these jems you tosed out last week, or maybe the monday 10th beat

[[E7] Half Beast]

!!!!

Fuckin ill,' Eyes roll to the back of my head, I wonder if theres really life after death, vultures watchin my steps, until I break down, they stop by and pick my brains out'..... Fuckin flowin son. Very nice shit on here.

GloineFiodh responds:

glad to see the diction was there. thanks man

[soillohsoquezy]

wery niysh

Oh my fucking what the fuck? man I was dazein through the intro and was like alright this pretty chill. But then the beat comes in and I started writeing this! nice track has a really good sound to it. I like this alot

fidgetfreak responds:

thanks man. was ironicly written durng a quite depressed state, yet it draws a positive outcome haha. but once again, i thank you for your time!

[One God]

One god whose style is untiled no stone set still

Don't worry about votes and scores on this site homie, just make your music, network, and get better. If thats sumthin you wanna do. You are pretty good at arranging sum beats, I enjoy it at least. Start perfect your mixing skills man, That bill ting throughout should be a resonant nuance with the tick roll and hit are way too trebled, they need to tone down a tab or the bass needs a boost. The arrangement is so fucking hard man, you can do sum things. I could go for a few more transitions, but that voice sample is run in nicely, maybe a lil transition on that to but it's fine the way it is. You make Mali Dance and Fuck Party music, In my opinion, guaranteed to get a crowd hoppin! Hone those skills in man, Dope arrangements here with this cat. Browse the portal and look for cats with a good whole and full sound and bug em for a collab. I'm sure there sum dudes around this joint that would help you progress. i would suggest stayin in the Olskool section too because the level headed people kick it over here, unless they finally added a dub step section on NG, doubtful ;( but truly delve into the net and forums and post sites for a lil while and see what you can learn about mixing because if these are your true arrangements than I'm a fan already, can wait to here sum of this with a comprehensive mix. Contact a cat named Haywyre. Hes into Dubstep and I think his live set-up is still down so he's around the house maybe if he likes your style he'll work with you a bit. I only suggest attempting him because he's the most talented producer I've seen come out of NG (not much for a 2 year stint in the modern NG with audio portal. I've scoured newgrounds since a youngin with the tellitubbies sniffin coke and the original pico school game, Even the old tank battle BS where the portal was all submissions by the founders before the bout asses upon asses of server space. I have much love for this place, And I think that if you search for the cats That embrace the olskool newgrounds of knowledge and forward progression. After the clock crew and the flash portal got big it was trolling 0 bomb city. Thats why people score your shit without listening and don't leave reviews. So only pay attention to the people that give you love and want to help you progress. Much love

Rant on you music, This is how my mind is working from the sounds you have given me

Bare witness, there is only one God, who is interpreted as many things, but is in the end only the first ever thought, and a hope that people wouldn't succumb to their ability to innovate their own demise. THe stories that are told about him only reflect the tale tellers own greed, and his hope to succeed. Sumone else runs the show now, but you do too, we all do. Supposedly! But still I know there's not a cage or cell that's set for holding me. True and press demons to never get through. Clear thoughts, cold vision cuz my hart is too. Still I know that
One god whose style is un-tiled, no stone set. Still known to get vile will compile my thoughts properly. If only to teach the people modern living properly.

I wanna catch up on one of your good beats when I'm wasted like I am now , Shoot me a pm and I'll give you my email and shit.

ElderBabaji responds:

AIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGGGGGGGGHHHHHHTTTTTTTT .

[Coins]

Potential

I think you would do well makeing that lead more electric and throw a more wholesome bass. I've listened to a few of your songs and you sound like you could develope into a pretty good dub-step Dj. Great concepts, with some good samples to match and a good tweak on the actual sound of you instruments like the resonance of the drums and reverb, flanges and what not. The sound is "flat" because it sounds like a bunch of presets. Don't be afraid to use a few mediums to mix, like head phones, then monitors, then burn and take it to the car is what I do with my vocals to hear it across all soundscapes. I don't know what program you are using, and I'm no producer, but I believe what berdin was talking about with 'soft' was the flat sound of the (I assume) un-mixed arrangement. keep droppin shit and try to hook up with sum of the cats on here and other sites and around your town that may know more about mixing within the program you are using. Forums are a great place to scour knowledge from people that want to take the time to push an idea. Anyways, thats my ten cents. Now that I spent my coinss I'ma take the toss and check out the rest of your stuff!

ElderBabaji responds:

Now this is why I post my stuff on Newgrounds. I'm using Ableton, and have really gotten my teeth into it the past 3 months, it feels like every song I find a new essence to my style. I just had my goodfriendproducer over and he was schooling me on laying basslines. I'm here to learn, and this review is helping me do that. -1-