LyRikLyNkLyNd's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Big Red - Down We Go]

wow, I've never heard you rap

I guess i'm behind the times. Nicely intelegent lyriks, Reminds me of the outcast I was in highschool. One spot the flow was kinda off, but all together this is sum good shit. Love the beat selection, perfect for the mood of the song and the artists who made it are within the best hip-hop producers on NG. Great song, I'd love to collab with you sum time, just PM me.

BigRed responds:

Maaan, you can't comment about "one spot" without saying what it is! Now I'm listening through it trying to find it, haha. Thanks for the review, I'd love to collab sometime!

[HW - Day 1 Beat 2]

nice work here

That 70's club music. This beat is pretty fuckin fyre, love the melody at 1:42 on feels like a Doors/Disco hip-hop masterpiece. 10 days of bliss, oh joy!

haywirehaywire responds:

thanks haha

[The Tale of Stickam]

OMFG u are mai jesus

"You say you got a boyfriend, he's just out the door
I say "If there's a goalie, doesn't mean I can't score" ' Fucking awesome, I wish this was more than just a verse. Funniest I've heard out of stickam, keep it up

merlin responds:

Glad to have appeased you, my sire! be sure to check out some of my more serious work, too!

Regards,
merlin

[Bongos, Brass, and A Bad Prez]

Gotta love the bongos

Bongos are pretty wicked. I wanna hear a dif scratch track on this tho, I already heard the 'may god bless you' and its sick, but i wanna hear what u do on another. I've heard tha sample of the bass guitar in the verse on this site b4, but it still goes great. I like the drum roll at 1:16 with the build up(and its implamentation at the end), but it seems like after that the beat should come in harded or at least transition. Nice track tho, keep up the good work.

shaggyhaired responds:

Thanks for the review.
I agree about the transition part, but I didn't really know how to implement it.

I made the bass part myself using BroomstickBass Vst, but it may have been done elsewhere.

Thanks for the 10 man :)

[open ya eyes]

Great flow and lyrics

Amp the vocals sum and change the melody to sumthin that hasent been dropped national and you'lll have a hit single. Nice work, Only thing I don't like is the hook because it's autotune. I never really enjoy autotune because it sounds too labored in a bad way... Everything is great tho, I could hear this on the radio with a lil transition of the melody, sounds too much like 'EM gon drop any second. I'm fixin to go check ur other works, Keep up the flow on the beat homie, you got skills.

twickz responds:

fo sho ima get on a new chorus n ima get it on another beat thanks bro

[GG_all_Day]

I'm stuck on this

I'm stuck on this!!!! i'll write u sum lyrics on friday... or whenever they stick, maybe tomorrow, it's an off day but I got shit to do, we'll see

DjSpaghetti responds:

wicked man ill check em out

[Yumbo-Yak - Left Fi3ld]

CRANK THIS!!!!!!

Hatein it for ur Comp, but lovein this beat. 1:33 the strings sound a lil off key, But other than that I almost wrecked my computer wit my cranium while immitateing a bobblehead! Nice work, I hope the FLP issues get worked out so I can hear sum more fyre soon.

Yumbo-Yak responds:

lol, i lknow...but it wasn't too bad, the problem was the instrument and the fifths, they were fifths, and the harp was a bad choice :(

[Lejin - GrimDriven]

I drive grime

I'm glad u decided to come back 2 NG.

Lejin responds:

So do I, But what does that have to do with Grim?... nice try

[CKC - In The Night]

Killed me

FUckin ILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL. Yea thats the explainations, gotta cold melody like it's a vaciation, Elation
Lyrically i'm feelin it no hate-on-l-a'
lol i'm to drunk and sknuknd to erview but i'm on whats u doin, keep it up. love em ery time CKC1

CKC2009 responds:

yay for drugs and booze!

[Wyze - Fragments]

Hell Yea

Wyze Killin. Love the ABC's. First verse is grity as fuck, I like the way you rappd it like your a stick up kid in an alley. Like the freestyled hooks, I can tell a great improvement in your flow since i came to this site.

Blasphem-E responds:

Glad you liked it dude