LyRikLyNkLyNd's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jitterbug Waltz For Skullgirls 2]

Love the swing! This is a nice track! there's one part that it drags a little, the end is good on that, but it's around 50 to 1:10 seconds. could use some little tweaks, maybe a drop beat or sumthin, or even give it a place for a hook in those 8 bars. full transition type thing. I dunno it's your thing. ANd it's really good!

[Lonely Piano :(]

Blue Dog Space Cowboy

[Meme Council]

Dangus, love the mix part! this is silly and fun. Sounds like a freestyle , it's very well rounded if it is. Good cuts, and the turn getting rick rolled on an ivory tower!! LMAO! I would love to see the video of this, it's already staring out the window pane.

[Path of a Prophet ruff]

Second verse is lit! that style really murders this beat!

[Voices In My Head]

Yo, this is sick track!
I can see a fallout bunker; dingy from time and mossy swamp, buried deep in the earth. Directly above stands a great ancient tree hanging ripe with the fruits of all taste and culture. Fireflies dance among the fruit seeking to find those that are most ripe for the picking ritual.

Deep in the bunker; The ghosts of scientists clamor around a robot skeleton on an operating table as if they were surgeons. What a desperate battle for life this was! The ghosts were trying desperately to maintain the little bit of memory the robot had left!

Then, in an instant. All the things where found to diverge. The Tree swayed, The Firefly's danced, The Ghosts faded, The twiiig of the ripest Fruit snapped, The Bunker illuminated, ANd The Robot sprang to forward on a new frequency.

All the memory stored away to come rushing forth from the ripest fruit, which is you

Ruko29 responds:

wow....emm thanks xd.....thanks for your comment :3

[Gift [WIP]]

I really like you're structure through the fours. thats kind of how I write. You lead in with a 2, run 4, then back out with a 2. And it's so hard to ever figure out what should be where... 2 8's? a chorus and a half verse. Or the chorus' on each end of the songs spectrum depending on how you structure the verses context... especially on a loop. It's sick starting the next line rhyming with the end of the last, but way hard to figure where you fit it in when you blast. you can really ramble with those sentences because they basically punctuate to Example (the core - theme; the obtacle, and the overcome) It's almost like you gotta sing it coming in, but you rap it cuz thats what you know. Everything is relevant as long as you know it is, poetry in motion to define how you're feeling. I wrote rap and posted em for 2 years here, now i'm trying to figure out how to structure a sing song. It's all pretty fun and fulfilling. Keep it up bro, the next ones right down the street!

budjohnson responds:

Dude thank you for the detailed review. I really appreciate it. Yea I started out only doing 2s or 4s but for everything I did here I was really just not focusing on the structure. Might’ve been a bad thing, but yea that’s why I’ve been having a lot of like free verses type deals.

[-mao- Life Slices (Maobux Vol.3) prod by Zooloo75]

YO! fucking loVe!

MaoDaMighty responds:

thanks A-ron! long time now see, nice to hear from ya!

[Kami | Aloe]

I like the undertones, it's a great jam track!

[Kami | Lords]

Yo dude, I think i've hit-up a track or 2 of yours. I know for sure I've listendededed to some of your stuff repeatedly! I love that your still makin this slick ass buggie yo, I can get down! I haven't been around here in like 6 years and I was writing sum stuff, then this was the first thing that came up and it fits perfectly to it! Crazy real, I'll message yo when i'm sober L3

[Nobody Listens]

Can't nobody listen to somethin like this! THEIR TOO BUSY MOVEIN!! it's that blue dog shuffle. this song would be equally amazing with steel and a harmonica. Nice dirty dog dance tune WOOF