LyRikLyNkLyNd's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gangsta Love - M.I.C]

decent track, love the hook, but...

Not much bout sum real gangters. I thought it was about 5 p's and six points on top. The end could have came much harder Honestly I think you got your g.E.d but you never learned about sum wings. Speak on progression and i'll feel that gabgsta shit u talkin "I could write a couple of novels wit the wisdom that i've learned, Poetical prophet preachin put practice in my words." There's 5 p's that are audited but integritized. Think on the basic philosophy and improvise from there, don't spit like mainstream then clown on em. Stay up tho and keep makein tracks, just come prepared when you talk bout what you talkin bout.

[Let'z Ride *09 Exclusive*]

pompous arrogant cocky son of a........

I must say that the cocky attitude is not ill credited. phenomenal work here, I'd love to see you battle beats with sum of these other kats on NG. It would be a mighty fierce knock down drag out competition. If this does end up happenin then plzz PM me, or if you drop another beat with this magnitude. stay up.

Bleek989 responds:

Haha "arrogant Cocky Son Of A Bitch" lol That Cracked Me Up Bro. Shit Im Not Cocky, Just Bored Of This Site. And All The Haterz On It. Least You Still Gave Me A 10 lol. But Yea Hoping Some Ppl Will Wanna Battle =]
Thanks For The Review Bro

[Did You Ever...]

I feel demented

Despite your sellf criticism I think this is a pretty sick track. With sum decent rap it would be a lil better, but this is a pretty sick track to say the least. The melod is way sinister, but in in a good, non-cheesy way, lol. It sounds more like an exorsism of emily rose than the munsters or adams family. True epic horror, it holda the hope but cradles the sinister at the same time, Veddy Niche.

[HW - Day 6 Beat 12]

great groove!!!

Hey, this is pretty good. I kno, I kno I spit on it earlier so it's obviously fyre, but I feel like you've updated since then...as a matter of fact I kno it lol. I love the melody that u added, feels like the old xylophone they would play on classic scary/comedy movies when the skeleton would come out. OH GOD HELP ME, IM SHAKEIN TO PEICES RIGHT AT THE INTERSECT OF THEM BONES!!!!

haywirehaywire responds:

hahah

[La Vem Ela (Demo)]

pretty damn good

Fuckin sick. The scratches put sum premeditated murder onto a killer track. The guitar (sample?) is homocidal. It reminds me of sumthing my buddy Matt picked out when he was bout 10 hydro's deep off into his bliss while the scratches just add to this effect. Nice voice sample too, sounds like he's singin to the person place or object that he loves. Great feeling on the beat. I think this is the first of yors i've reviewed but i will be lookin for ur name in the future.

maer808 responds:

thanks man appreciate the review, check back on my site for some more fresh shit!

[HW - Day 5 Beat 10]

Stellar in it's own special way

This Is that maniac music. I feel like the melody at most times has a bubbeling noise like i'm popping in and out through the caverns of my brain. It almost feels like the costmonauts hapless journey through the expanse of a weightless playground. Nice work here, this is puttin me to the rapid eye tonight.

haywirehaywire responds:

haha damn nice word play, got an interesting picture in my head from it.

[NW Liberation [LM]]

RUSH

Haha I hate rush, but this is a pretty hard beat. I like Classic Rock to Hip-Hop re-mix's alot and I think this gave me a little bit more love for the band rush in general. The rolling tick at 1:45, i dunno if its closed hat or rim but it's way too long, maybe shorten it or add sum pauses. Other than that nice work, I kinda feel what v-that guy down there is sayin bout the clap, but maybe just a volume alt is in line for that.

SilverGorilla responds:

you guessed it! im not real big on the rush but a roommate of mine likes em a lot so i tried findin a melody or loop from one of their songs i could make my own. thanks for the review bro

[Funeral for a Killer]

phat shit

Nice mix, I must agree, 2 very stunning artists.

Gasmasq responds:

I shall hold them close to my heart for many years to come.

[Big Red - Let it Out]

Sell a word and the television will come

And the couch potatoes. Damn dude. I must say, I thought I was on sum awesome until I heard what you spit and feel humbled severily. Nice hook, If you equalized it to bring out sum of the bass in your voice it would sound a lil better, I guess you're singing voice is called a tennor? I duno but I know you have sumthin here. Obviously your beat with the beat-box on it, Nyce Shyte. TAKE THIS PEN AND LET IT ALL OUT OF YOUR HEAD! without crushin it. Thats a difficult thing to do for sum people, but I think u displace it from the crane to the page like young man with too much rage turnin into a sage.

BigRed responds:

I really had no clue what I was doing with equalization here, I just kinda recorded and threw some reverb on it, haha. I actually sing base normally, but I could probably pull off baritone and 1st tenor. Im diggin your last line/rhyme man, haha. Thanks!

[Big Red - Amen]

This dude is killer!

Fuckin fire ass lyriks, I'm sorry for myself that I havent heard u rapping until this evening. This is sum really good shit, true underground. Keep speakin the truth and the reality that main-stream america seems to hate so much. Closed minded individuals that don't want to face the fact that their ego was never even noted because it was undermined by their lies and false reality.

BigRed responds:

Im glad you like it all man, I really enjoy reading your reviews. Keep on doin what cha do!!