Smooth,
Very Nyce, Do sumthin with this man, I like where it's headed. Could use an echo Booo weoo weooop, hahah if u knowadimean. Plus the clap, if you eq it like it's a breath it would be more sexy on a track like this. Nice work so far, PM me if u post the finished beat.
Thank you!:D i have changed the clap into what you said ! its sound awesome!
about the echo booo weoo weoop iam not sure :P but i think you will like it :D
ill pm when its done ;)
ITS SAFE TO SAY YOU SHOULDN"T BE FUCKIN WIT KOA
Kiss my ass, you guys suck. No talent at all!!!!!
Ah shit I lied toooooooooooooo. LOL, Gald this track came about, all the MC's and the producer are "catch my eye" artists, so when I saw this I had to come sit for a few, Nyce track
you should check us all out
THis is feel good music
This is that sunny days, care free music. Makes me wanna go to fuckin Tybee island this week cuz it's our spring break here. Floatin on the ocean wit a matini makein my mind into graffiti.
Dude.....
You have to go hard on the fuckin river card, Wasim was not in formed. Steve Guzzi was. Now ending 8, I guess Wasim felt there was no re-coop. Good effort on everybody but Wasim just didn't have the feeling in it. Check out the River Card if you haven't!!!!
I should been in this comp
I should been in this comp 3 beats so far that I already have a song on, Props to Shaggy Haired for the beat. Shout out to vashelite on the collab we did on this track a couple weeks ago, shit's hard. Congrats to Gasmasq for the verse, the win was a given but you still went raw. BN, WTF dude, you used to be all for this shit, Couldn't even finish the verse? I guess he's growin up, Peace ya'll
Yeah
Gloine went hype like sum other dudes, round 2 gonna be bangin. Chris G, invest in a mic dude, for real, sum better rap skills first , or let tha mic give you the motivation to rap better. I can't tell wich one's better advice cuz your vocals are crazy off equals. Ya'll both did what you could tho, See one of ya in round 2, PEACE!
I think.....
That the other gut meant to say that the emotion is missing. It feels kind of empty without the feeling. It seems as if you are just telling a story about that kid, instead of becoming that kid(through your vocal emotion).I like the story alot, but to relay the deepness of the lyrics u absolutely need to become that kid and show your sorrow for the loss of talent before it's shown. Good luck, stay up, keep at it
see this is what i like good criticism...
i feel what you are saying man and after listing to it i can tell
i need to become the boy
and i can do it
thank you for bringing it to my attention
STAY UP MAN!!!!!!!!!!!1
Yo!!!!!!!
The bombing is ALL over Newgrounds hip-Hop. You got a 5 from me tho, nice song. All you fellas went real nice. GRIM- Holy shit son, do you ever slow the fuck down, Damn son!!! Joey- Dude, Nice rap, the beat is off the chain as always. mackyty went real nice too, real nice. The 2 cats at the end, YEAH! nice rhyme schemes, both went totaly different from anyone else on the track. Everything is put together really well. I'm downloading when i get home from work. Stay up fellas.
Yeahhhh man >.> shit is crazy. I cant slow down.. its like impossible.. if i throw a slow flow.. I think i sound wack. Shits not cool. So.. steady paced buncha words is the way to go.
SAY WHAT!?!?!?!
Assholes, Our time trial got bombed too. Fuck the haters!!!!!!! AT LEAST REVIEW BITCHES!!!!! Got less balls than Lance Armstrong, internet thugz, Crackers that say n***a more than black folks do, BITCH, i'm Caucasian, Fuck the easter bunny, i'm eatin a sandwich bitch
AYE GOOSE
YOU GO HARD DUDE< WE NEEDA COLLAB, SOUND LIKE DA CAT FROM RE-HAB
RESPECT TO THE BEAT- FAYDE, WHAT UP THO! MIND GAMES BABY, PEACE
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